I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Damian I like the way you did your slide and writing on the top of your image. Next time you could leave out the forward slashes. Keep up the good work. From Awa.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Damian I like the way you did your slide and writing on the top of your image. Next time you could leave out the forward slashes. Keep up the good work. From Awa.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Damian I'm Kryzma from Room 5, Ahipara School. I liked your descriptions and your pictures. Keep up the good work!
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