I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Good job on your blog post. This book looks quite interesting. Maybe next time you could write something about this book that you have read. One question, do you prefer that this book is good to read? Keep up the good effort and I am looking towards seeing more of your blog posts.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeleteHi Damian i like what you did about books i read.Next time can you put a little writing in.By Kyrhan
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Damian,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your blog post. This book looks quite interesting. Maybe next time you could write something about this book that you have read. One question, do you prefer that this book is good to read? Keep up the good effort and I am looking towards seeing more of your blog posts.
-Shriya from your class Rm11
Kia Ora Damian I like your work that you have did and keep on the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Damian i really like what you read about books but maybe next time add more detail. Good job. from Kryzma ahipara school.
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