I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Damian, This is Neha from Room 9. Your work is interesting to read. Maybe for the title next time you should write what the work is instead of writing work. Keep up the good work.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeleteHi Damian,
ReplyDeleteThis is Neha from Room 9. Your work is interesting to read. Maybe for the title next time you should write what the work is instead of writing work. Keep up the good work.